one of the things i like very much at the moment is that you are still free to explore characters and mood, you're not yet locked into a single narrative - so i never know quite what to expect; there was real humour in this piece which was a surprise but it worked really well. i love the symbol of the elusive and erstwhile bus stop. great title too!
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Date: 2012-03-29 06:25 pm (UTC)'Action Editing' - i may steal that label, LOL!
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